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From Draft to Offer: A Personal Statement Review

If you are unsure how to begin or what universities really want to see, a personal statement review is the ideal starting point. We will guide you on how to answer the key questions with authenticity and focus, so your statement reflects who you are and where you want to go.

Many personal statements lack impact because students concentrate too much on structure and not enough on content. A review helps you strike the right balance between clarity and depth, ensuring your writing has substance and purpose.

This is also a chance to start early, giving you the time to draft, refine, and submit a statement you feel proud of. Although this service is designed with social science applicants in mind, it offers valuable insights for anyone applying through UCAS, whatever your subject.


Get personalised feedback on your personal statement so it stands out to admissions tutors. Choose between a live 40 minute or a detailed written review on Google Docs by an LSE and Oxbridge Student.

🎥 40 min Live personal statement review (with someone from LSE and Oxbridge) – £13 💻 Google Docs personal statement review (no call) – £10

💳 Payment link will be sent once a suitable date has been confirmed with our team. This is an interest form only, and no payment is required at this stage.

⚡ Spaces are first come, first served – so sign up quickly to secure your review!


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