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Submit your draft for a verdict
One draft. One diagnosis. Delivered in writing.
What are you submitting?
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What are you submitting?
A
Story idea / synopsis
B
Scene / Chapter
C
Short Story
D
Outline
E
Lyric
(Choose one only)
Paste your work here
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Maximum length:
2,500 words
(Excerpts are fine.)
What are you trying to make this
do
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Where does it currently feel wrong?
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Choose the closest option:
Where does it currently feel wrong?
The beginning doesn't grip
It stalls partway through
The ending doesn't land
The emotion feels thin
I don't know, it just isn't working
What kind of feedback have you already had?
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Choose any that apply:
What kind of feedback have you already had?
"I like it, but..."
Conflicting advice
Notes about stakes
Notes about character
Notes about pacing
What would make this a success
for you
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Is there anything you explicitly do not want feedback on?
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Is there anything you explicitly do not want feedback on?
Style / voice
Genre expectations
Marketability
Personal subject matter
Final confirmation
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Tick both to confirm
Final confirmation
I understand this is a diagnosis, not a rewrite or coaching session.
I’m submitting one draft only.
This covers one written diagnostic delivered within 72 hours.
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